I came in second place in a love poem contest that had over 50 participants! Yayz!

And, now, my poem for your enjoymentz

'You & Me'


You smile

that forbidden


The one

that I


But, it

pierces me


cut through

me. My


yearns for

you to


me closely,

as my


repels you,

saying you're


A conflicted,

almost torn


Inside me,

rages a


Outside, you

see the


me. Unknowing

how much


Only knowing

ever present


plastered on

my smiling


Showing the

pain would


you, and

dampen your


toward the

world. So,


shall endure,

only for 


even if

it kills



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  • what a creative way to write a poem, very nice and congrats!!

    Posted Dec 21, 2009
  • I like it, but a way to make it better (Just an idea) Have the extened word also said something if one was to read only those.

    Posted Dec 21, 2009
  • very creative indeed! CONGRATZ

    Posted Dec 21, 2009
  • Well done :D

    Posted Dec 21, 2009
  • Nice poem. Congrats for winning the 2nd prize :)

    Posted Dec 21, 2009
  • Very romantic :)

    Posted Dec 21, 2009
  • Congrats.

    Posted Dec 21, 2009
  • Good job mate :)

    Posted Dec 21, 2009
  • wow..that's really interesting.

    and congrats on winning the contest.Smile

    Posted Dec 22, 2009
  • Good lil' poem you got there, congrats :]

    Posted Dec 22, 2009

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